so, next step taken, i was surprised to discover that i really like what i wrote. i like the story, i'm still engaged in the characters and parts made me smile and even laugh a little. the last 40 pages or so aren't as good, they need work. so i'm going to work on it.
unrelated: i like lists. here are a few more:
- apparently i'm not alone. here are 8 reasons why internerds like lists. my favorite: they are skimmable (she notes, while skimming the article)
- the morning news is doing a series of "best of" lists for every year since 1978
- kevin smith's top ten films of 2006
- another good spin on usual list....top ten discovered albums